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This house
This safe haven
represents all that should bring me peace
but doesn’t

it gets inside me
gets under my skin
thoughts intrude
and I feel empty.
And all that should bring me solace
doesn’t
and so it’s just me.

but you
you calm the storms
when I can’t find shelter
from the storm inside
and you
you are the sun
poking through the grey clouds
the cheese to my nachos
the ying to my yang
the west to my east…

and I
couldn’t be more grateful.
©2008-2009 ~mysterious-mog
:iconmysterious-mog:

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The whole value of solitude depends on one’s self
It may be a sanctuary or a prison
a haven of repose or a place of punishment
a heaven or hell
as we ourselves make it.

– John Lubbeck



... it didn’t dawn on me when I was writing it, but afterwards I was suddenly hit by the similarites between this and Jane Eyre, if you think about it :)

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:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
OMG only u could add Jane Eyre to something on dA :)
another get poem, tho i am picking up on something here.
hehe my fav part "the cheese to my nachos"
love it :D
:iconmysterious-mog:
Well what good would cheese be without nachos? honestly! :lol:

Thanks for all the faves by the way -I'm glad you like :aww:
Ahh, gee you're reading into things! *cowers* something tells me I should be starting to worry haha!

And I can't help it, Jane Eyre DID hit me all of a sudden! really!
:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
well that is a very good point that u bring up.

its telling u to stop being such a good teacher :D

yes, whatever u say. just keep in mind that i cant push my things in to everthing like that :)
:iconmysterious-mog:
Gahhh!
and so the student surpassed the teacher..! :happycry:
:iconeyes-wide-shut11:
well is that not the reason to teach :)

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